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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I think the centered composition is a bit boring and doesn't really give the viewer much to look at, which is compounded by the fact that the entire center of the image is blown-out. The "interest" factor is also diminished by the lack of focus.
I think a shot like this might be able to work if you were a bit further back and stopped the camera down so the depth of field was greater.
I hope you understand I'm not trying to discourage you - the only way to improve it to continue taking photos. Keep at it
what i have to say to that is,
i agree that the centered composition is a bit boring but just having the out of focus light i think it gave it a sense of mystery and progression.
i tried some farther back but i did not really like the outcome
this did not discourage me at all... thank you
much appreciated
i really did have to go to the other side